My heart breaks, upon distant shores
For you alone I ache, all I am, eternally yours
I can't promise to get it right, every single time
But I will hold you tight, until we cross the finish line
You complete me, and make things bright
With you I see, my entire life with new light
I can't imagine, going back to before
With a heart of tin, hidden behind a locked door
I see your tears, and they well up within my soul
I would gladly trade my years, if it would make you whole
I see it almost everyday, even though you lock them away
And I just thought I should say, I will be here for you always
Not merely words

damian- Moderator
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Location: Queensland, Australia
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- Post n°1
Not merely words

hoppy- Junior Poet
Number of posts: 11
Age: 40
Location: scranton,pa.
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Registration date: 2007-11-01
- Post n°2
Re: Not merely words
1st & 3rd verses, 2nd line in each- feeling that stuff all the way to the depths of your soul, that's the stuff I can relate to!!!! Sometimes it's a pro, sometimes a con, if you feel that deep you know what I mean! Awesome!!!

Sapphire- Junior Poet
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Age: 22
Location: Alabama
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Registration date: 2007-11-08
- Post n°3
Re: Not merely words
Awesome. It's really good. Puts all mine to shame for sure. 


