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damian
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Not merely words

Post  damian on Thu Nov 15, 2007 7:18 pm

My heart breaks, upon distant shores
For you alone I ache, all I am, eternally yours
I can't promise to get it right, every single time
But I will hold you tight, until we cross the finish line

You complete me, and make things bright
With you I see, my entire life with new light
I can't imagine, going back to before
With a heart of tin, hidden behind a locked door

I see your tears, and they well up within my soul
I would gladly trade my years, if it would make you whole
I see it almost everyday, even though you lock them away
And I just thought I should say, I will be here for you always

hoppy
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Re: Not merely words

Post  hoppy on Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:44 pm

1st & 3rd verses, 2nd line in each- feeling that stuff all the way to the depths of your soul, that's the stuff I can relate to!!!! Sometimes it's a pro, sometimes a con, if you feel that deep you know what I mean! Awesome!!!

Sapphire
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Re: Not merely words

Post  Sapphire on Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:24 am

hey Awesome. It's really good. Puts all mine to shame for sure. silent


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